Tuesday 24 September 2019

The amazing adventures of superstan

On 7th of August Karoro school came to Grey Main to see the play; The amazing adventures if Superstan! It was an awesome day and everyone was laughing at the jokes. There was this one boy who was being very rude by breaking the schools property and talking all the way through when we were all trying our best not to pay attention to that. A boy called Stanley Marvel does not know that he is a... SUPERHERO! His grandmother Ruby Marvel gives him the other half of the formula to turn him into... Superstan. But then he sees the Candy king which is his Grandfather that "died" in the war. But then they shrink him with his candy cane shrink ray. 3 cheers to Superstan!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Charlotte I'm Arie from Kaingaroa School,I really like your story and I hope you make a Part 2. I kinda got confused when you wrote the Candy King part, but other than that I really enjoyed your story. Did you get the last Marvel from the Marvel Company???
    -Thanks Arie

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    1. Thanks for your comment Arie. Grey Main School made the play by them self there is no part 2, Sorry but thank you for your feed back

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